Keep it simple, stupid!
While at the Orlando Megacon, I received a lot of praise for the pages on display for The Wellkeeper and it really felt great to hear that folks are looking forward to the first issue. I also worked up the nerve to drop off copies of the sketchbook with a few PROS who I respect TREMENDOUSLY! Among them are the brilliant comic artists,
Phil Noto,
Brandon Peterson and
Amanda Conner.
While they all had nice things to say about the book, it was Amanda Conner that offered up the constructive criticism that has inspired this post. To summarize her lesson to me: "Keep it simple, stupid!"
Now, I'VE added the "Stupid" here. Amanda was totally classy and very constructive in her critique, but the message was that I was obscuring good structure drawing with excessive crosshatching on Zoe's face and that I should pull back on the over-rendering for her. Now, this isn't the FIRST time that I've heard this, but t was the time when It finally sunk in.
I've attached an example above of the simplified detail on Zoe's face, and I couldn't believe how right Amanda Conner was. WOW, did her expressions and acting just pop off the page without the clutter of a zillion lines criss crossing her worried brow.(Thanks to the magic of Photoshop for allowing me to easily clean up her face) I have to admit that I'm putting a lot of pressure on myself to really deliver with "The Wellkeeper", and I think that under that self-imposed pressure, I have overdone some things in the early stages of production, such as the rendering on character faces.
I DO think that this change has greatly improved the opening few pages and I hope to take this lesson to heart on the successive pages from here on out.
Thanks, Amanda!