I've been working overtime to get these pages done asap, and here they are. The final four of the total 7 pages I'm putting together for my series proposal. I'm really proud of how this all is coming together and I hope that potential publishers like what they see too when the whole thing is put together. Frankly, even if nobody shows any interest in publishing this, I'm still committed to going solo. This is a story I've just gotta get out there. I hope you'll all agree when all is said and done.
3 comments:
Wow! Very cool! Hope the publishers agree!
-Josh
Great pages, dude. Awesome linework throughout, but I guess you already know that... Mr. Fish.
Did you ink on blue line printouts? Does it really allow you to work faster since your pencils don't need to be very tight? I wish I trusted myself enough to ink my own stuff like you do.
One comment though. In that page with that skateboarding kid. It's a great dynamic downshot, but the fact that he does a border break kinda forces my eye to skip panels 2 and 3 on the upper right, and go straight to panel 4. That's it really. Everything else is pure gold, man.
Great pages, dude. Awesome linework throughout, but I guess you already know that... Mr. Fish.
Did you ink on blue line printouts? Does it really allow you to work faster since your pencils don't need to be very tight? I wish I trusted myself enough to ink my own stuff like you do.
One comment though. In that page with that skateboarding kid. It's a great dynamic downshot, but the fact that he does a border break kinda forces my eye to skip panels 2 and 3 on the upper right, and go straight to panel 4. That's it really. Everything else is pure gold, man.
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